1. While going to the USA Open I met the love of my life, the champion of tennis, I met Rafael Nadal.
2. I love eating fried chicken. Fried chicken is the best chicken there is, and I can gladly eat it everyday.
3. While coming home it started to rain heavy outside. I didnt have an umbrella so the bestthing I had were my legs, so I ran to my house. While running, I ran across the street and foolishly not paying attention I didnt see the car coming and I was hit. Surprislingy, my adrenaline kicked in and I got up as quickly as possible and continue running home.
Good. You have enough details to convince the reader of all three of these. Be careful retyping your work. There were some careless errors in here.
ReplyDeleteIs #2 correct?
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