Monday, November 21, 2011

Journal # 10

Classy                                                  Trashy
  1. fancy clothes                                         slut
  2. fancy food                                            ragged clothes
  3. fancy cars                                             fast food
  4. lives in a mansion                                  lives on the street
  5. well-mannered                                      redneck
Rudy Snob was, as her name betrayed her to be, a rude and snobby girl. Her parents and her always at fancy food and wore fancy clothes. Rudy woke up from her annoying alarm clock, got dress, and ate breakfast. "Good evening madam," her limo driver said to her. "Good evening Sebastian, now hurry up and take me to school I dont want to be late." "Right away madam," Sebastian said. He then drove her as quickly as he could to school. As Rudy walked in the school she should could see all the girls glaring at her and the males looking at her with lust. "Hmph, what savages, every single last one of them," she said to herself. As the first bell ranged everyone rushed to class, except Rudy, who took her sweet time, knowing that she wouldnt get in trouble.

"Arrgh I dislike Rudy so much," Starfire said to Sam. "But you gotta admit shes pretty hot and rich, the perfect girl for me," Sam said with a smirk. Starfire then glared at Sam harshly, Sam right away knew that was a sign for him to shut up and this wasnt the time to fool around with Starfire when shes like this. "So like I was saying, look how rudly she just walks in class and not get in trouble for it, like really who does she think she is. Just because shes rich she thinks she can do whatever she wants," Starfire said to Sam. "Well, Sam said, thats just how the world works Starfire, the rich will always get what they want." "Not in my school they won't, not now, not ever, starting with Rudy Snob."           

1 comment:

  1. I love the name choice!

    10/10: Wonderful mastery of both the Authorial Tone and Interpretation by Another Character. Each have a certain distance attached to them, but yet still connect the reader to what is important within the passage. I love the details that you chose to include.

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